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Old 10-07-2007, 07:22 PM   #1
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Default Mutiny! is BACK! (UPDATE: 7/09/09)

I all of a sudden decided that I needed to be doing some sort of webcomic or die. After hastily planning and ultimately scrapping an update of an old webcomic I had done, I then quickly wrote an episode set in the Mutiverse (? lol) that some may recall (and can be found in my sketchbook).

Here's the title page, fresh off the PS work...a PK exclusive.



I went with the campy synop to evoke that retro space opera feel. More to come!

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Old 10-13-2007, 06:00 PM   #2
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These turned out darker than I intended...worked on them on my laptop, I'll have to keep that in mind in the future.

(edit) I lightened them up (/edit)





Anyway, another PK-exclusive, I won't be hosting these elsewhere until sometime next week. Sorry about the rather bland gray-job, I will be working on improving that as I go along, but I am trying to have this comic have a reasonable update schedule.

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Old 10-13-2007, 06:16 PM   #3
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i'd like to see where your going with this *sits waiting for some action*...........

by the way how many members survived is it some left on the ship maybe they should catch some sort of spacefever(like cabinfever) just an idea

keep up the good work
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Old 10-14-2007, 03:05 AM   #4
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The original project that these characters are from had 7 characters...8 if you count 'invisible' friends...all of them are returning along with 2 more that got cut from the original project's script due to the page limit (16 pages). Adam, seen in the second strip, is one of those characters.

Slow Dawn can be thought of as an episode in the overall story, and sorry but there are no plans for a spacefever in this episode at least (although the mutiny may very well have occurred as a result of something similar...).

If you would like to read...and read...and read all about the original project's setting and script evolution you can check out the old writer's forum thread here. Just don't bump it, it's almost a year old.

Anyway, there will be more to come, and it should come rather soon so be sure to check back!
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Old 10-21-2007, 02:32 AM   #5
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Old 10-25-2007, 12:24 PM   #6
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Got all bogged down this week and I'm out of town all weekend, so this is it until next Wednesday or so. Already threw my biweekly updates out the window.

Enjoy anyway.
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Old 10-25-2007, 12:39 PM   #7
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I like the scripting/dialogue a lot...but that is countered by my ABSOLUTE HATE of gradients.
Bad Bizz0b. actually draw your backgrounds.

Also, add some ripples in the water...doesnt look very watery.
different angles maybe?

other than that stuff, very good.
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Old 11-06-2007, 03:53 AM   #8
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After a hiatus last week, Mutiny is back!



I began to ween myself from the overuse of gradient backgrounds, but there are still some...sorry but I'm lazy. Thanks for checking it out Orange, I promise that there will be fully drawn backgrounds in the next strip.

Next update on Thursday!
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Old 11-14-2007, 12:11 AM   #9
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So I lied about the backgrounds...there are some but they aren't 'fully detailed'. I got lazy with this one.
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Old 12-09-2007, 05:31 AM   #10
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This page is not up to par, and I hate it with a passion.



It took me so long to even want to finish up on this one, I should have just started over.

Anyway, now that this obstruction has passed, updates should come faster. I was also doing a lot of post-semester vegging.
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Old 07-09-2009, 05:20 PM   #11
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Mutiny is back! Here's a double post to bring the year long hiatus to an end. I had pencilled and partially inked these way back, but I just now put the finish to them and I will begin working on the new strips shortly.







I hope at least someone remembers this and hoped (at least occasionally) to see it continue.
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Old 07-09-2009, 07:50 PM   #12
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wtf blizzob i didnt know you had a comic
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Old 08-07-2009, 02:04 PM   #13
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Thanks mofo, but I have yet to see you work on your return to the comic.



Updates should hopefully start coming a bit faster. We all know what that means.
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