AegisFuzzy VS HappyMonkeyClown

[AegisFuzzy]

I'm working on a whole theme of creatures that are along the supernatural lines and always give my creations background so here it is. Bear with me it's long but it always helps in the design and might help if the design isn't clear.
Name: Poacher
Type: 2nd tier LEECH
Manifestation: Physical
Origin: Human
Feeding: Poachers feed of of positive human feelings, keeping themselves concealed and hidden while they do so. They leave only the negative destroying families and friends from the inside. When their targeted group no longer has enough positive energy to sustain them they will consume the targets themselves and move on.
Traits: Very pale and commonly has an unaltered, smiling face, generally that of a young boy or girl. As their soul and body are still human if somewhat twisted wards for demons and ghost are ineffective. They stick and move through the darkness, contorting their body into impossible positions, their bones making tiny cracking sounds. Hair capable of varying lengths falls and frames the face so dark it is impossible to make out individual strands or what it is covering. excluding their faces their bodies are starvingly thin and distorted. Their feet have been distorted into another pair of hands. They only attack one group at a time and will follow them relentlessly until they have been completely consumed before moving on.
Creation: Created from human souls and bodies that have been broken a thousand times over, muscle bone and tissue are no longer constrained by their original design. Souls corrupted and destroyed under the eyes of gluttony seek only to feed their insatiable hunger.Their broken bodies can contort to mimic another persons general form as well as their voices however when listened to via recording the voice can be dissected and is found to be made up of of thousands of screams.

(picture will be up when i get off work)

[AegisFuzzy]

alright the first is a rough sketch for ideas and what i thought of the character. her face originally would change when feeding but i scrapped that.
*mild nudity*

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The second is a finished sketch of how i see her

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[marpune]

This is great,are you going to color these.The poachers seem like succubi.Is that what you going for.Very interesting subject,
Its scary!

[HappyMonkeyClown]

Wow! Great ideas! It creeped me out a little though
So... im meant to draw something similar?

[Professor Az]

Originally Posted by HappyMonkeyClown Wow! Great ideas! It creeped me out a little though. So... im meant to draw something similar?

Yes. Most people draw the same creature/person/thing/whatever in their own style, then present a new picture for the other person to draw.

Nice work, Aegis.

[AegisFuzzy]

thanks marpune and prof. and happy most people do but put your own spin on it, however it is you see it you draw it that way. My favorite thing about this is seeing how different interpretations of the same idea can be. Don't feel like you have to stick with the weird girl theme. Heck ignore the drawing and use the back story instead.

[HappyMonkeyClown]

Great, thanks! I'll have something up by tonight.

[HappyMonkeyClown]

It didn't turn out as well as i had hoped. But ill improve once i get the hang of this.

[AegisFuzzy]

cool now you do your own sketch and i do it in my own way.

For the picture: everything is flat, vary it up add perspective and shadows to give it depth. don't feel rushed its normal for people to take a couple days to respond. Remember the basics and anatomy.