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Old 07-22-2008, 06:48 PM   #81
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Nice stuff Bro,Youve improved so so much on your faces and the like, keep up the good work,

p.s i like your clothes, you draw them well
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Old 07-29-2008, 09:12 AM   #82
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I just went from the first page to the last and there is a lot of improvement there it's incredible. I still see you making a lot of mistakes, but you are on the right track of finding your way.
Details of faces such as eyes , noses , mouths , ... seperatly are very well done, but once you zoom out and draw a whole face you tend to slip up and not put in as much detail anymore, which is why a lot of the sketches look ... "childish" for lack of a better word.
kweckduck: I apologize for the "childish" look in my sketches. Sometimes I get lazy, other times I just want to see the character in line format and other times as you said I "slip up" and fail to render them properly. Thank you for your honesty.

enimito: Thanks, I'll try my best too.

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Old 07-29-2008, 09:34 AM   #83
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Merc: No problemo.

Watch the hairline there in those sketches. That's very on the limit, unless they have some hairproblems I'm unaware of.
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Old 07-30-2008, 05:12 AM   #84
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faces have deffo gotten better. Now I'd say watch out for the hands. they're lookin' sorta small.
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Old 08-02-2008, 06:02 PM   #85
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kweckduck: The thin hair line was not intentionly. Thanks.

AmourFonce: Thanks for coming back. I'll try to be more mindful about my hand sketches.

Faces again. Trying to develop a support character for Distorted Infatuation. Which involved a reference, but as you can see it didn't turn out right.

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Old 08-12-2008, 05:58 AM   #86
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More sketches. Thumbnails for two pieces I would like to finish. Along with reference sketches. I tried to improve the scan quality for you, hopefully its more to your liking.

Sequel







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Old 08-12-2008, 05:07 PM   #87
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Extra motivated today, hence double post. Really trying to improve and show you the progress made whether big or small. All reference. Don't expect too much.

Pencil complex







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Old 08-13-2008, 08:10 PM   #88
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More sketches. Mostly reference. Don't expect too much.

Shadow style



Concept for another comic I'm working on, called Spring Shadow. Trying to find something presentable for her to wear, but messed up.




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Old 08-22-2008, 09:05 AM   #89
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Practice sketches. Mostly References.

Feet of Redemption



Open Canvas with reference. I tried.






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Old 11-04-2008, 01:41 PM   #90
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Imagination and references. Don't expect too much.

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Old 11-04-2008, 01:46 PM   #91
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Imagination and references.

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Old 11-04-2008, 01:57 PM   #92
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Imagination and reference.

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Old 11-04-2008, 04:00 PM   #93
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wowwww looking from your first post directly to this post... amazing improvement!!! congratulations!
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Sxey: Thanks.

Aid of some references.

Curious Palm.



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Old 11-05-2008, 08:37 PM   #95
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should the cuff of her sleeve stick out like that? i think it'll look better if it fell down to her elbows, and the whole thing looks kinda flat to me.
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Old 11-07-2008, 05:31 PM   #96
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should the cuff of her sleeve stick out like that? i think it'll look better if it fell down to her elbows, and the whole thing looks kinda flat to me.
The intention was to have her sleeve fall like that, because of the type of fabric I had in mind. It may not be right, but that was the idea. Thanks for the criticism.

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Old 11-07-2008, 05:58 PM   #97
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Hey dude, I see some wonderful improvement here, and some seriously good dedication + hard work.

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Imagination and Reference. Don't expect too much.

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Old 11-21-2008, 02:34 PM   #99
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Imagination and reference.
Jigoku

From Jigokuen's sketchbook.








Less than Human concept art, perviously Robot Coffin.




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Imagination and reference.

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