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Old 07-05-2006, 10:25 AM   #21
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you dont piss me off tangerine, i love you
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Old 07-07-2006, 01:35 AM   #22
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Really cool comic, I really like the start !
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Old 07-07-2006, 08:53 AM   #23
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you dont piss me off tangerine, i love you
Just what I always wanted--an excuse to carry pepper spray to work.
Gosh, SilentNerv!

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Old 08-03-2006, 04:43 PM   #24
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Woah! Your art is fabulous! ^^
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Old 08-07-2006, 05:53 AM   #25
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also trains can b stopped pull the emergency brake DUH
now elephants charging cant be stopped so easy
nukes cant be stopped
my sex drive cant be umm yea u get it
i wanna NO THE ending dammit
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Old 08-12-2006, 12:10 PM   #26
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Default nukes can b stopped...with bigger nukes...

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Woah! Your art is fabulous! ^^
I....I....don't think...check your facts first...OH GOD THANK YOU!!!!

I'll need that to finish redoing damn page 2 it somehow doesn't come to me, so chew on page 10 for a bit...oh yeah I learned how to sail yesterday and wtf why dont they let liquids on planes anymore what does gatorade have to do w/ terrorists, I hope water isn't included I'm dehydrated enough already and I ALWAYS bring coffee on the plane with me. Coffee is my special occaison food, I only drink it at the movies, traveling and when I pass exams.
And yes it's a food. I'm not supporting stupid dunkin' donuts...if you want to ban liquids from carryon, give all the planes a healthy organic beverage bar and free complementary sunblock because the only thing worse than fat white turistas are fat pink turistas.
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Old 08-13-2006, 08:03 PM   #27
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Very interesting comic haha, Ill check back on it :] Keep on it though!
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Old 08-16-2006, 09:03 AM   #28
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on number ten should have added more of a tilt on his head to show the impact of the bottle
makes it more dramatic

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Old 08-19-2006, 11:24 AM   #29
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Old 08-19-2006, 11:25 AM   #30
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Thank you

edit: i MEANT to tilt his head more, i even put it that way in the storyboard, but somehow it ended up with this :( and I forgot my soap back in the states it sucks but washing with shampoo gives you awesome skin everyone try it
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Old 08-20-2006, 08:11 PM   #31
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keep it up gt i wanna see the end. the artwork is pretty good and i like the story so far.
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Old 09-16-2006, 03:43 PM   #32
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Reasons why insomnia is good with black pajamas:

1. Invisible, sneaky coziness
2. Spy on the street through Venetian blinds
3. Make ninja sandwiches in the dark and blame mess on cat
4. Awesome dreams where you and your friends rob Target
5. Meow realistically through bathroom window and pretend to give everyone's towel bad luck
6. Steal siblings' toy/stereo/car keys and leave coded ransom note
7. Crawl under your bed so everyone thinks you've run away

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Old 09-16-2006, 07:36 PM   #33
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After reading your comic an then your comments, I am convinced that you are completely insane. Don't change a bit though

I really want to know whats going to happen next. Will she kill him? Will he kill her? Is it just foreplay? Oh the suspense...
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Old 09-18-2006, 04:19 PM   #34
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Why thank you. Insanity is a very artistic thing most of the time. However I can guarantee that it's not foreplay--cmon ppl they just woke up, work to get to, figure it out...
I think one lost a bet to the other which makes the sheepy one have to give up meat and do the other's housework, and our hero pathetically resists by giving the other various pet names that happen to be vegetables. (???!!!) But I'm not telling you what the bet was! SUFFER!
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Old 02-03-2007, 12:02 PM   #35
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So, travel literature. I've only read the American type, which has a formula like this:
1. Your editor tells you to get on a plane and have 1200 words written before you come back.
2. You exaggerate everything you do for punch. 'The shuttle bus was delayed' becomes 'I was forced to sleep on my suitcases until 3 in the morning when the shuttle bus, crowded w/ avian flu-infected turkeys and their owners, woke me up with a chorus of folk music blaring out of the speakers with enough force to scare off the zombies from Vampire Hunter D.'
3. You get paid. And published. At the same time.

This never fails. Doug Lansky applies it to everything from the Ice Hotel in Sweden to learning to kickbox in Thailand. Even Bill Bryson, who lives in Britain or so now, exaggerates Austrailia in an attempt to make everyone notice that it's a country, too. But sometimes you trip over a gem that the author just couldn't make up, especially a loser like Doug Lansky.

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Renato, an all-around good sport who had an impressive grasp of English, joined me in my red Ford Fiesta.
"Okay," he explained as I adjusted the rear-view mirror, "Driving in Naples is like a video game. You just have to relax, stop thinking, and feel it in your stomach."
How's that for more than your average bump?
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Old 02-04-2007, 10:36 AM   #36
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That's some awesome work! Seriously! I like the style and ... your characters are pretty cool :P
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Old 02-04-2007, 12:10 PM   #37
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Thank you! I don't see how they can be! You barely know anything about them. Drawing FASTER is a new year's resolution for me, though, so look forward to unlucky page 13!

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Old 03-01-2007, 01:42 PM   #38
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The thing about money is when you have it, everything you want wants you back. You can spend your life looking for exceptions to this rule, but you won't find one because that's what human society has degenerated to, a closed loop of millions both living and dying for something so simple and easy to produce. Fame, education, health, power, romance, popularity--the fact that money can get you so many things is its very problem. Without money, so much of life is a clenched fist. That's why believing money important is the greatest mistake of all. It's only wasted if it isn't spent, just like milk. But this doesn't apply to having your boyfriend drive you places because you don't like the bus. Even if you take forever looking for a parking space, you're spending quality time together

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Old 03-05-2007, 03:20 PM   #39
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Damn tang, thats some sweet stuff. I love your art and the story line so far makes me want more. When you ganna do more? as for the cover definatly C. well depends on how your going for your comic. If its ganna be funny and zany alot the sheep thing is the way to go, but if it gets more twords the serius side of things just a pillow woould be good. (or a pair of red eyes would be sweet) Well love it so far and cant wait to see more keep it up.
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Old 03-05-2007, 07:19 PM   #40
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Thats a hard one. I suppose Ill do more when I either get the dengue fever again or some more comments. But you contributed to at least one of those!
I kind of want it to be between serious and ridiculously funny...the sheep arent going away though theyll be making a cameo later. As aforementioned, the only thing better than drawing sheep is drawing clouds with sticks poking out
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