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Old 03-23-2006, 09:46 AM   #1
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Default Demon Dreams (May 24: page #15, sorry about the delay)

Here we go...oh yeah, when I said I wouldn't bump anymore I WAS LYIN! harharharharhar! Now off to rewrite the first chapter of my novel and then do another Detective Hero, before June 1's bad astrological setup slows me down.

Page 1 (redone!)

Page 2 (redone!)

Page 3

Page 4

Page 5

Page 6

Page 7

Page 8

Page 9

Page 10

Sleazy Ad Mock-Up

Page 11


Page 12

Page 13

Page 14

Page 15! New!



'Cause I want to show my gratitude for those who keep threads like this hot...here is some CG crap slapped onto a sketch (like you couldn't tell) pretending to be a cover. The gray space in the middle is where I ran out of ideas.
it can be:
A. Pillow.
B. background (window, furniture, other stuff)
C. Psychadelic sheep background.
D. Leave it gray...

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Old 03-23-2006, 12:40 PM   #2
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nope... this is the right forum to post comics... :P (since its called Comics/Sequential Art ) i guess..

I WANT to know what happens next! tun tun tun.. cliffhanger!
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Old 03-23-2006, 02:06 PM   #3
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ye want to see the end
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Old 06-15-2006, 10:52 PM   #5
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heat wave is like a train! YOU CANT STOP IT!!!!!

..unless you pull the breaks....
BUT IM NOT GONNA DO THAT!!!!!!!

........not yet at least...
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Old 06-15-2006, 11:01 PM   #7
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lol... ok i will

its good, i actually like it! Your not all talk about your characters, you know how to be original! very cool, i say continue working on it
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oh.. you need more boobs though... that will get people looking
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Old 06-15-2006, 11:08 PM   #9
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....boobs...
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Old 06-15-2006, 11:11 PM   #10
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Old 06-15-2006, 11:13 PM   #11
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You people don't understand that I'm struggling with the easier aspects of drawing females APART from boobs, and smacking boobs on something doesn't make it good. Recently I drew a cow, but I made her udder pretty small sorry.

The next page contains blood though, I hope that's just as good.

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Old 06-15-2006, 11:34 PM   #12
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better be lots of blood! im talking spraying action!!!! I WANT EVERY CHARACTER TO BE COVERED IN BLOOD!!!! thats what the people really want
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Old 06-15-2006, 11:39 PM   #13
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*jumps in through the door* "hey man! where da boobs at?"
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Old 07-04-2006, 09:07 AM   #14
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Default page 9...WTF?!!?!? this guy needs to hit a couch

This is all your fault, Mofo! I can't believe I drew this, maybe I should be locked up somewhere. I'm really sorry about Page 9, I won't do it again!

The truth is, I was meant to screw this up. I mean I generally suck at drawing blood (hahaha) and gruesome scenes. I'm pretty releived his nightmare is over. It was starting to give me the willies. But now I gotta draw him waking up, etc...so don't get disappointed and leave, willya? Everybody's got a weakness and in comics I have quite a few.

PS. Not such great quality either. I happen to be stuck on a desert island and have (sniff) left my scanner at home. I'm have to make do with my digital camera for a bit, but at least I have relatives around in case the food gets scarce. BTW, is there a special way to take better pictures of your art--a certain mode, method? I might as well learn about it now.

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Old 07-04-2006, 09:36 AM   #15
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ok u ppl r wiggy now BOOBS! BLOOD! BOOBS AND BLOOD!
xDDD =DDD xDDD =DDD
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Old 07-04-2006, 09:45 AM   #16
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Damn it, is anybody reading my hard work at all? The comments here are rather making me lose faith in the availibility of guys out there with more than two brain cells to rub together.
For the last time, the boobs come LATER, if you can't wait go to the permanent top of this forum, Mofo's perverted frankenstein monster Heat Wave! Heaven knows the Internet has enough boobs without repeating someone else's comments over and over.
God, I love drawing sheep though; you just make a cloud and add legs...
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Old 07-04-2006, 12:11 PM   #17
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dont give up, keep going im reading


ps.
MORE BLOODDDDDD AAHHAHAHAHAAAAAAA
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Old 07-04-2006, 02:20 PM   #18
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I will. Ironic that my arch nemisis is my best regular.
Did anyone get the pun in my last post? 'Two' 'rub together' xP
Yeah, so I try to alternate between making new pages and redoing the old ones, because they really bother me. What should I do--get his wakeup scene over with, or redraw page 2? I have the storyboards for both.

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Old 07-04-2006, 02:57 PM   #19
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lol i thought we were friends
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Old 07-05-2006, 07:22 AM   #20
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We are, we just piss each other off.

As a side note, if anybody likes my work here...check out Mantis, right here in my sig. I mean it, I need your help. After years of drawing the greatest fish who ever swam in b/w, I can't decide what color to make him!
And yes, my begging is pathetic. Now to hit my sketchy.
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