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Old 07-29-2014, 08:46 PM   #1
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Taking a break from some freelance. I'll get back to treasure star once this lot of freelance finishes up.
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Old 07-29-2014, 09:28 PM   #2
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Nice, very nice. I'm a total n00b when it comes to lighting, but as harsh as the window light is, wouldn't her right arm have more specular on the bicep/tricep? It also seems like maybe her shirt would be a bit more illuminated.

I really want to like.. duplicate this scene but irl, to know if the way the cloth is hanging down if it would pick up any light.

But yeah, *very* nice.
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Old 07-29-2014, 10:11 PM   #3
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Thanks!

Actually the window light isn't harsh at all, the lighting is a diffused cloudy day with it exposed to inside. , essentially im using the window as a giant softbox.

http://i1.creativecow.net/u/95756/0_overexposed.jpg
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7100/7...fe4da86f_c.jpg
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