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Old 10-13-2014, 07:34 AM   #1
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Color Art Cyborg Girl.

Really trying to push my skills with this one.

Already been through a few rounds of iteration. This is the original http://i.imgur.com/6Lx9pD9.jpg


Second Iteration is on the left and the current wip is on the right.

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Old 10-14-2014, 06:57 AM   #2
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Old 10-14-2014, 02:52 PM   #3
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Nice to see a cyborg girl that isn't automatically accompanied by skintight catsuit (I've been guilty of that myself sometimes).

Some little protrusions underneath the skin to show how the arm is anchored might be nice. The shoulder joint is one of the most complex in the human body, and mounting an artificial shoulder solidly enough that it doesn't tear off usually involves cross-body straps and fitted chest plates.
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Old 10-14-2014, 04:09 PM   #4
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I feel like head is little too big, also i agree on what djizomdjinn said, would be cool if you added some more detail on that cyborg and human parts bonding
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Old 10-14-2014, 08:32 PM   #5
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I like the one on the left more, personally.
While I understand that not everything has to be tied to realism, I will side with Jin and Black and say some attachment visual would be badass.
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Old 10-14-2014, 08:51 PM   #6
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She is an android with socketed arms, :P. I'll be adding some little details to help show that off properly.

I disagree with the big head, as im not shooting for ideal proportions and it always weirds me out looking at how big and small peoples heads look in proportion with their bodies.

Thanks though guys!
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Joe, sorry you posted when i had this page open haha.

Not sure why you quoted me here, But yeah i understand why you might like the left one more but the right one is hitting the marks and goals that i want to hit in a much more effective manner.
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Old 10-15-2014, 08:36 AM   #8
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Probably the last update before i finish it all up.
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Old 10-15-2014, 01:21 PM   #9
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I like the shading where her skirt meets her leg. It screams the material at me The buttons as well. I am looking forward to how you tackle her feet :P
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