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Old 08-09-2007, 06:08 PM   #1
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Black and White Everforce Page 1

Pencils for the first page of the first episode of a webcomic for penciljack.com.

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Old 08-10-2007, 06:39 AM   #2
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love it. is some1 gonna ink/colour it?
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Old 08-10-2007, 08:21 AM   #3
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damn thats some amazing panel work and shading! nice job
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Old 08-10-2007, 03:21 PM   #4
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Very, very nice work! This demands to be colored! Let us know when the webcomic launches, I'd really like to take a peek at that.
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Old 08-13-2007, 10:20 PM   #5
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sweet, sweet pencil action as usual dbovey. The face in the last panel is definitely my favorite aspect of this page.
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Old 10-19-2007, 10:52 AM   #6
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Thanks guys. Sorry it took me so long to respond.

But here are two more finished pages and also page 4 in progress...







Still need to draw the 5th panel on the last page and add a hint of horns on panel three to show her transition.
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Old 10-19-2007, 09:27 PM   #7
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this awesome is for any particular company or just personal project me thinks it really gona be something! also how long does a page take u? and teach me haha keep it up
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Old 10-19-2007, 10:15 PM   #8
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Very nice, i love the attention to detail that you have.
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Old 10-28-2007, 11:27 PM   #9
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Thanks!

Here's page 4 completed...

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Old 10-29-2007, 05:17 AM   #10
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will we get to see some speech?
its really nice. keep it up

edit: found the script on penciljack. looks very interesting, I can't wait to see the page with kaine jumping, but moreso how you portray the phone falling. It's tough to picture the characters from the script but i cant wait to see the finished versions.
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Old 10-29-2007, 06:15 AM   #11
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very lovely, some parts need darkening, but I think once you ink it'll look great.
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Old 10-29-2007, 06:41 AM   #12
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this is pencil?

i think i am too dumbstruck to say anything at the moment.

what size page did you use , and what kind of pencils?
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Old 10-29-2007, 08:28 AM   #13
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Thanks for looking!

For anyone interested in the 8 page script for the first episode can be found here:

http://www.penciljack.com/forum/showthread.php?t=78909

It will be inked colored and lettered and then published on the web once it's done. Half way done with my part of it.

aido179, yeah, that will be an intesting and challenging sequence. The character designs can also be seen at Penciljack. I like Kaine's design, should be fun to draw.

Urbansamurai, These were all done using a mix of HB and F grade drafting pencils. And in some spots I've used an ebony pencil.
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Old 10-29-2007, 09:21 AM   #14
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Yes but what size page did you use?
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Old 10-29-2007, 09:25 AM   #15
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These pages were drawn at 16 inches wide by 12 inches tall.

Not the typical comicbook layout but it was done this way for web publishing. 4:3 ratio to better fit the screen.
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Old 10-29-2007, 11:22 AM   #16
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is it A4 size ? A5 size?
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Old 10-29-2007, 11:34 AM   #17
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I've just spotted a problem, zodia is wearing gloves yes? well on the center panel on page four would show something like a sleeve.
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I've just spotted a problem, zodia is wearing gloves yes? well on the center panel on page four would show something like a sleeve.
Yeah, she's wearing fingerless gloves. The problem, which I'll be fixing, is that I forgot to include the square open part (over the top of her hand) in the 3rd panel.
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Old 10-29-2007, 11:47 AM   #19
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is it A4 size ? A5 size?
The exact paper I use is Strathmore 500 series bristol. It's a pad of paper that comes 14X17". I don't know if that fits into printer paper sizes.
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Old 10-29-2007, 11:55 AM   #20
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it would be like a5 except more square, its not a regular printer size
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