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Old 06-29-2014, 03:47 AM   #1
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Hello.

I am still working on my game. And with that I really mean I am working on a game. I just don't have an awful lot of time and I am generally pretty bad at everything game related so it is going really slow. Glacially.

Here are two of the 10 main bosses:

Rainie. She is a spin on the Greek muse Urania. She has wings which she can use like a bow. Her outfit should resemble a retro space suit with art deco elements. Her silhouette is supposed to be kept very simple.
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Leona. She is a spin on the Greek muse Clio. I imagined her with heavy armor around the shoulders (to get a unique shape). She is a knight.
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Old 07-03-2014, 02:51 PM   #2
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Nice work. Very nice. Have I said they were nice yet? I meant awesome.
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Old 07-19-2014, 06:56 AM   #3
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I feel like the black outlines flatten it out too much. You have this really nice, soft shading that's being confined by the lines...maybe try some width variation? Taper thicker on the dark spots, I'd almost say get ride of the lines on some of the lighter parts.
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I kind of agree with Meatloaf that the outlines might be a bit too thick at some places. On Raine it looks fine, but on Leona the thick outlines really flatten her armor.

Other than that, great colors, very cool designs.
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Old 08-10-2014, 05:22 AM   #5
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Thank you RobotCat. I am working on having more control over my lines right now. I hope I'll be able to show improvements soon.
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