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Old 12-05-2004, 07:18 PM   #1
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Two sketches I did. First is supergirl holding up a wall or something. And the second is just batgirl.


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Old 12-06-2004, 03:50 AM   #2
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The overall anatomy looks good. I think you practice inking these. Inks make drawings pop off the page. I like the batgirl one the best.

Nice, losthope.
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Old 12-06-2004, 09:41 AM   #3
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Nice pics. the only thing i can see is that on the first one her right foot seems off, the hands and fingers seem... to blocky. and also the lines around her belly button( don't know what to call them) see to be out of center, i'm guessing they lead to her. well you know, and it doesn't seem like the legs would meet their. I can't tell you how to fix it cause i suck at anatomy, and these are just my opions.
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Old 12-06-2004, 10:22 AM   #4
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Cool stuff you have here. I too prefer batgirl over supergirl.
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Old 12-06-2004, 11:38 AM   #5
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looks good. I'd so comment on the heels on batgirl.. but I think she actually had those back when barbara gordon was batgirl >_<
the new batgirl is way cooler...
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Old 12-09-2004, 10:29 AM   #6
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Another quick sketch.
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Old 12-09-2004, 01:05 PM   #7
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Good work so far, but there still are areas where the pictures could improve.
In both pictures, it looks like you just skimmer over drawing the hands, they don't look finished.
Also, in the batgirl pic, her abs stand out a lot, especially since she seems to have no indication of muscle anywhere else.
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Old 12-09-2004, 01:08 PM   #8
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nice work on the super heros.. not much else I can say on them that has not already been said.

On the fas sketch, looks ok.. just watch the eyes. the offset one is too small and too far to the otherside of the face.....
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Old 12-14-2004, 07:05 AM   #9
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Yea I know it sucks. Its like my 3rd attempt to color and I know its crap.Oh I stole the pose from one of Alex Ross’s superman paintings.
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Old 12-15-2004, 10:23 AM   #10
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Ok this is a sketch I did of snake cause the hardest part of him is his head to draw. This is to get use to him for fight club.
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