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Old 03-21-2007, 10:26 AM   #1
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hey
here's another one
hope u guys like it
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Old 03-21-2007, 11:01 AM   #2
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hmm you need more practice but if you stay the course you will become a very good artist, the armor is nice, but you should study anatomy more, even draw skeletons form medical books if you have to, it will help understand the amount of freedom you are allowed when drawing a humanoid figures, don't worry about backgrounds now fouces on anatomy and basice shapes and everything else will follow you will see , any way great work I hope we will see your skills progress as time goes by...... pick up that pencil and keep drawing........now ;P
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Old 03-21-2007, 03:18 PM   #3
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hair, fibers and shading are allso things to learn.
i wish i did.. im to darn lasy =)
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Old 03-21-2007, 05:59 PM   #4
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The thing that sticks out to me most, even more than anatomy, is the lack of tone. The whole picture is just gray. Try working in a range of tones, from white through to black, to make your picture pop.

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Old 03-22-2007, 09:12 AM   #6
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actually, i dont know what it is gold_tangerine
i just wanted to fill up the back ground
and make it look like a little windy
that's all
thanx for the comments everyone
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Old 03-22-2007, 09:45 AM   #7
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My comment has to do with a \\\\ thing going on in the composition... the sword, the arm the shin the other arm... it's so uniform it makes her look mechanical. If that's her left breast on the other side of her knee, I don't think that would be possible- I think there would just be overlap there. Also... there is something in the background which appears to be very very big, and it does not look like Venus. :P
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