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Karbonite
Join Date: Mar 2007
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![]() hey
here's another one hope u guys like it ![]() |
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Celestial Watcher
Join Date: Mar 2007
Location: UAE, home land is Lebanon :)
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![]() hmm you need more practice but if you stay the course you will become a very good artist, the armor is nice, but you should study anatomy more, even draw skeletons form medical books if you have to, it will help understand the amount of freedom you are allowed when drawing a humanoid figures, don't worry about backgrounds now fouces on anatomy and basice shapes and everything else will follow you will see
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Karbonite
Join Date: Mar 2007
Location: Israel
Posts: 175
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![]() hair, fibers and shading are allso things to learn.
i wish i did.. im to darn lasy =)
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Easily distracted
Join Date: Mar 2006
Location: Perth WA
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![]() The thing that sticks out to me most, even more than anatomy, is the lack of tone. The whole picture is just gray. Try working in a range of tones, from white through to black, to make your picture pop.
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Direct Order to Rock Out
Join Date: Dec 2005
Posts: 2,308
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![]() I second that. Also, touch up the hair and front foot, they don`t look real. Is it sand or sky at the top of the picture?
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Karbonite
Join Date: Mar 2007
Posts: 16
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![]() actually, i dont know what it is gold_tangerine
i just wanted to fill up the back ground and make it look like a little windy that's all thanx for the comments everyone |
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Karbonite
Join Date: Mar 2007
Posts: 232
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![]() My comment has to do with a \\\\ thing going on in the composition... the sword, the arm the shin the other arm... it's so uniform it makes her look mechanical. If that's her left breast on the other side of her knee, I don't think that would be possible- I think there would just be overlap there. Also... there is something in the background which appears to be very very big, and it does not look like Venus. :P
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