What i like about the work is the clean pencil artwork. Whenever i do pencil work its filled with pencil lines all over the place. namely i don't rub them out (i try to avoid doing that tbh).
Some promising stuff that could certainly be elevated to another level. If you must know, i never took art as a subject in school when it became optional. So the last time i ever picked up a brush or use water colors was back in year 9 ( i think when i was 15 years old?).
Thought of the day:
"Life is one great journey. Shame about the destination"