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Forum: Art Critique 03-03-2011, 10:03 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,462
Posted By CapNChapM
that looks just like Jessica Alba. do you look...

that looks just like Jessica Alba. do you look at a lot of pictures of her? maybe it's just a coincidence or just me. either way, nice.
Forum: Art Critique 09-08-2009, 09:51 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 2,474
Posted By CapNChapM
I like it a lot. Its simple and imaginative. The...

I like it a lot. Its simple and imaginative. The lighter shade in the background makes me think he's standing in a gloomy room with the door cracked and a light on just outside of the room, The...
Forum: Art Critique 11-21-2007, 06:03 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 2,378
Posted By CapNChapM
the branch looks symbolic

the branch looks symbolic
Forum: Art Critique 11-18-2007, 05:04 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 2,032
Posted By CapNChapM
beard could have used some more contrast to stand...

beard could have used some more contrast to stand out a little more
Forum: Art Critique 11-07-2007, 01:28 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 2,696
Posted By CapNChapM
on the first drawing the shin below the knee gets...

on the first drawing the shin below the knee gets much smaller than the foreshortening on the thigh suggests
Forum: Art Critique 10-18-2007, 11:54 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 1,395
Posted By CapNChapM
I don't know how hip hop people look at your...

I don't know how hip hop people look at your school but neither of those characters strike me as hip hop at all. there's no representation of hip hop culture there. it looks more pop-anime, the...
Forum: Art Critique 10-08-2007, 08:59 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,539
Posted By CapNChapM
what's keeping that saggy belly roof held up?

what's keeping that saggy belly roof held up?
Forum: Art Critique 10-07-2007, 09:01 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 3,312
Posted By CapNChapM
and I like the title

and I like the title
Forum: Art Critique 10-07-2007, 08:52 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 3,312
Posted By CapNChapM
its unfortunate that people can't make a comment...

its unfortunate that people can't make a comment without being told they're arguing by somebody. nice drawing, jerk
Forum: Art Critique 10-05-2007, 01:04 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 3,312
Posted By CapNChapM
I don't believe I ever suggested an all black gi....

I don't believe I ever suggested an all black gi. Everything you said, Kuro, I've seen/read before. I don't disagree. All I said is that there is no representation in the drawing. period. She...
Forum: Art Critique 10-03-2007, 08:36 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 3,312
Posted By CapNChapM
we're not friends

we're not friends
Forum: Art Critique 10-03-2007, 06:59 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 3,312
Posted By CapNChapM
I'm just saying there is no point in saying ninja...

I'm just saying there is no point in saying ninja then. with that reasoning you could have drawn her doing anything and said ninja. baking cookies in the kitchen with an apron, and call it a ninja,...
Forum: Art Critique 10-02-2007, 04:10 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 3,312
Posted By CapNChapM
the only thing that says 'ninja' about this...

the only thing that says 'ninja' about this drawing is the world 'ninja'. I don't count the pseudo naruto armband. it's a fine drawing, my only crit is how is that a ninja? big let down. if you...
Forum: Art Critique 08-12-2007, 12:05 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 10,549
Posted By CapNChapM
the whole picture has really smoothly shaded...

the whole picture has really smoothly shaded colors, except for the lines under her boobs, they're too dark and too much of a line. if you could use that smooth shading there, too I think that would...
Forum: Art Critique 08-06-2007, 01:22 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,796
Posted By CapNChapM
I like the lines you use. but in this third...

I like the lines you use. but in this third picture of the girl I think it looks cluttered with the amp right behind her, maybe with some space between the two objects it would look a little easier...
Forum: Art Critique 08-05-2007, 06:21 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,796
Posted By CapNChapM
some more clearly defined lines under the eyes...

some more clearly defined lines under the eyes might help, too. it looks like the pencil kind of smears/blends together there, so his eyes are part of his cheeks almost as well.
Forum: Art Critique 08-05-2007, 06:17 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 2,743
Posted By CapNChapM
when I first looked at it I got a really innocent...

when I first looked at it I got a really innocent feel from it and it's really hard to pin point why... but I can definitely see both elements existing. I think it may be the way she's dressed and...
Forum: Art Critique 08-05-2007, 04:26 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 2,162
Posted By CapNChapM
I've never been big on coloring, I don't even...

I've never been big on coloring, I don't even know how to go about it besides really basic stuff. maybe I'll give it a shot at some point soon. thanks for the time and suggestions.
Forum: Art Critique 08-04-2007, 01:02 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,834
Posted By CapNChapM
those are some good crits... her left boobie is...

those are some good crits... her left boobie is more swol than her right one.

...

that's all I got
Forum: Art Critique 08-04-2007, 12:54 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,890
Posted By CapNChapM
nice. do it to it, lars.

nice. do it to it, lars.
Forum: Art Critique 08-04-2007, 12:52 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,200
Posted By CapNChapM
I think her left foot could stand to move up some...

I think her left foot could stand to move up some more on the page, it almost looks like it's coming from the middle of her waist instead of her left hip, and the way it is now presents a long thigh...
Forum: Art Critique 08-04-2007, 12:47 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,887
Posted By CapNChapM
it's hard to pick out many details since the...

it's hard to pick out many details since the penciling is so light. you said you're going to do them darker, so sharper contrast and darker lines should really help these.
Forum: Art Critique 08-04-2007, 12:43 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,716
Posted By CapNChapM
she's buff. something about that right shoulder...

she's buff. something about that right shoulder of hers makes me think it should move a little bit to the left so the armpit doesn't come in so close to the chest. but I could be wrong.
Forum: Art Critique 08-03-2007, 08:07 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,890
Posted By CapNChapM
ha, sorry I ruined that for you. but yeah, you...

ha, sorry I ruined that for you. but yeah, you do always have the option of going with it anyways, it's your drawing, man. In the f irst one I think you'd still have to reangle that forearm a...
Forum: Art Critique 08-03-2007, 06:53 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,890
Posted By CapNChapM
I'm wondering what some advantages might be of...

I'm wondering what some advantages might be of having some type of wings at the lower back? they could be there, and I think it looks cool. the thing that bothers me the most and hasn't been...
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