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Forum: Art Critique 03-08-2011, 08:33 PM
Replies: 15
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Posted By Raemaxwell
I want to hand it to you for including an older...

I want to hand it to you for including an older bearded guy as one of your leads. That is rare and needs to happen more. Cat and wolf's clothing is excellent, but fox doesnt look as natural. His...
Forum: Art Critique 03-08-2011, 08:11 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 1,206
Posted By Raemaxwell
Vampire Hunters

Hello all! I show up here every few years, hang around for a while, and then dissapear again, so I am not new, but nobody here has likely seen me before.
This is my latest work, and I would love...
Forum: Art Critique 03-08-2011, 07:28 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 4,157
Posted By Raemaxwell
I would be confused if I were that sammich....

I would be confused if I were that sammich.

This is great! It is cute, and she looks adorable chubby and eating. The only critique I would offer is that it isnt clear where that tomato is or is...
Forum: Art Critique 03-08-2011, 07:24 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 1,226
Posted By Raemaxwell
His left hand is beautifully shaded, and so well...

His left hand is beautifully shaded, and so well put together, so I hate to suggest changing it, but I dont think it would be that limp. If he is in battle and working with magic, his hands would be...
Forum: Art Critique 03-08-2011, 07:17 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 2,695
Posted By Raemaxwell
I really like the textures you used in the...

I really like the textures you used in the background as clouds. They dont look anything like clouds, but that is just fine because it matches the overall disturbing feel of the picture.
Forum: Art Critique 03-08-2011, 07:07 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,704
Posted By Raemaxwell
I really like it. The colour choices work really...

I really like it. The colour choices work really well and the odd combo of carefully shaded and totally flat suits her. I would have smoothed out the lips though, to match the neck-plate thing....
Forum: Art Critique 09-05-2007, 05:37 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,422
Posted By Raemaxwell
You're right about the face, it was done with...

You're right about the face, it was done with 100% red paint. It wasn't a choice at the time since I had only three colors available, but for next time would it be better if I used a muuuch less...
Forum: Art Critique 09-05-2007, 05:26 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,409
Posted By Raemaxwell
We can't really help with the face until you...

We can't really help with the face until you start drawing it.

I like the curve of her back, it isn't realistic, but it fits the drawing overall. I do agree about her upper arms being too long...
Forum: Sketchbooks 09-05-2007, 05:09 PM
Replies: 74
Views: 21,573
Posted By Raemaxwell
If you're in a lecture hall or classroom, you can...

If you're in a lecture hall or classroom, you can usually get away with storing blank white 8.5-11 paper in your textbook or binder. Thats the trick I use. ^^
Forum: Sketchbooks 09-05-2007, 05:03 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 4,330
Posted By Raemaxwell
I think the man on the rock is my favorite. It...

I think the man on the rock is my favorite. It looks like the cover to an epic faerie tale!
Forum: Sketchbooks 09-05-2007, 05:01 PM
Replies: 501
Views: 264,833
Posted By Raemaxwell
That Warg is fierce!

That Warg is fierce!
Forum: Sketchbooks 09-05-2007, 04:58 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 13,733
Posted By Raemaxwell
I absolutely love that lively realistic style you...

I absolutely love that lively realistic style you have. The plant and owl are my favorites.
Forum: Sketchbooks 09-05-2007, 04:54 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 3,003
Posted By Raemaxwell
Rae's Sketchbook 2

I'm back!

Like the hatching, but lips are waaaay too small.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y195/Raemaxwell/doodles%202/bobby.jpg

Chinese...
Forum: Art Critique 09-04-2007, 09:31 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 1,359
Posted By Raemaxwell
Now that that first issue is taken care of,...

Now that that first issue is taken care of, moving on. She's cute! One thing I notice however is that her neck seems to narrow a lot as it connects to her head and it should connect a bit further...
Forum: Art Critique 09-01-2007, 08:30 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 3,585
Posted By Raemaxwell
I seem to remember a photomanip of merry and...

I seem to remember a photomanip of merry and pippin being given to Merry's actor to sign, and he made a hilariously scandalized expression and held it up for the cameras.

He did sign it though, I...
Forum: Art Critique 09-01-2007, 04:36 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,422
Posted By Raemaxwell
Instant coffee, at various thicknesses stains...

Instant coffee, at various thicknesses stains extremely well just on it's own. I just love using it! I mixed it with paint thinner for this canvas so that i could mix black acrylic with it, and for...
Forum: Exercise Yard 09-01-2007, 04:27 PM
Replies: 107
Views: 38,219
Posted By Raemaxwell
Even in the two year course of my fatally...

Even in the two year course of my fatally confusing and rarely produced webcomic, the changes have been...
Forum: Exercise Yard 09-01-2007, 03:22 PM
Replies: 673
Views: 213,465
Posted By Raemaxwell
Artemis

Here's artemis. I'm sure you imagined a tough-guy image, but the black curly hair just gave me this one.

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y195/Raemaxwell/finished%20arts/artemis.jpg
Forum: Art Critique 09-01-2007, 02:13 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,422
Posted By Raemaxwell
Color Art Dark City Cop

Acrylics on the foreground, and coffee for the background.

Any suggestions? I feel that the top is a bit blank, any ideas for what i should put up there to balance it out?

Sorry about the angle, I...
Forum: Art Critique 09-01-2007, 08:37 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,556
Posted By Raemaxwell
I agree, more curves are definitely in order if...

I agree, more curves are definitely in order if you want her to be an adult woman. It's very possible she would be this flat, but she would probably have much smaller boobs.

Another thing you could...
Forum: Art Critique 09-01-2007, 08:33 AM
Replies: 22
Views: 3,585
Posted By Raemaxwell
The Harry x Draco pic is, I believe, a...

The Harry x Draco pic is, I believe, a paint-over/manip by an artist called Theban. She paints visually realistic yaoi for movies and books (narratively realistic? Not so much, but yaoi is never...
Forum: Art Critique 09-01-2007, 08:25 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,941
Posted By Raemaxwell
Ten points for the Frazetta Homage! Fantastic...

Ten points for the Frazetta Homage!

Fantastic work, and everyone seems to have covered the crit bases, but I would like to say that I'm not too fancy on the mist at the bottom. That is the only...
Forum: Art Critique 08-01-2007, 02:40 PM
Replies: 33
Views: 3,017
Posted By Raemaxwell
Absolutely amazing work so far. One thing I might...

Absolutely amazing work so far. One thing I might suggest is that since the green glows so brightly on her hair, that it should reflect on her skin at a higher saturation instead of the white-green...
Forum: Art Critique 08-01-2007, 02:32 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,727
Posted By Raemaxwell
I like how you paired a face that would normally...

I like how you paired a face that would normally be assigned to a bookish/shy sort of character with a very aggressive pose and body. Three cheers for going against cliches! I also like the subdued...
Forum: Art Critique 08-01-2007, 02:26 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,392
Posted By Raemaxwell
The lighting on the first picture is rather...

The lighting on the first picture is rather confusing. The homeless man is being lit from the side while the ventriloquist-looking fellow seems bathed in sourceless light. I like how you did the...
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