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Forum: Art Critique 07-30-2005, 07:49 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,626
Posted By Kern The Germ
Heh. Char1 wants to be Squall Leonhart so bad.

Heh. Char1 wants to be Squall Leonhart so bad.
Forum: Art Critique 06-28-2005, 10:31 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 5,558
Posted By Kern The Germ
No crits on the technical aspect from me....

No crits on the technical aspect from me. Excellent job as always.

The character design is a little funky, though. Other than the fact that he's only got 3 fingers and 2 toes, there is absolutely...
Forum: Art Critique 06-25-2005, 07:30 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 981
Posted By Kern The Germ
Meh. Looks far too much like that incredibly...

Meh. Looks far too much like that incredibly beautiful boy (girl?) you posted earlier for my tastes. Methinks you should invest in a new hairstyle.

As far as the pic itself goes, the lights on the...
Forum: Art Critique 06-22-2005, 04:42 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,488
Posted By Kern The Germ
You're not thinking of the hand in the right way...

You're not thinking of the hand in the right way at all. Instead of drawing it in terms of its outline, draw it in terms of its forms. For example, the palm of the hand is supposed to be a roughly...
Forum: Art Critique 06-21-2005, 08:05 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,246
Posted By Kern The Germ
The lines could use a little cleaning up, but I...

The lines could use a little cleaning up, but I guess the color forum isn't exactly the place to crit that. Your drop shadow adds some interest and three-dimensionality to an otherwise boring...
Forum: Art Critique 06-21-2005, 08:01 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 2,674
Posted By Kern The Germ
Background perspective doesn't match up. For...

Background perspective doesn't match up. For example, the window on the door doesn't match the line established by the sidewalk. The windows on the building don't match the building either.
Forum: Art Critique 06-21-2005, 11:30 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,237
Posted By Kern The Germ
It's alright, but it's far too generic. Case in...

It's alright, but it's far too generic. Case in point, you used that exact same pose and style to draw three different pictures that are all the exact same. I highly suggest doing some drawings from...
Forum: Art Critique 06-21-2005, 11:23 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,898
Posted By Kern The Germ
First off, I'd like to say...

First off, I'd like to say "GAAAAAYYYYYYY."

Secondly, your colors are pretty good. More vivd and with more lights and shadows than most beginning artists. But you've fallen into the familiar pothole...
Forum: Art Critique 06-20-2005, 02:47 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,299
Posted By Kern The Germ
I think you should call up this Strauss guy and...

I think you should call up this Strauss guy and tell him (1) That he's not Joe Mad, and that (2) That chick looks like a boy.

I mean, uh, the only real crit I have is that the girl's hair looks...
Forum: Art Critique 06-19-2005, 09:06 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,385
Posted By Kern The Germ
The pants are absolutely fantastic, but I think...

The pants are absolutely fantastic, but I think the whole thing could stand to have a slightly stronger light source. And, saying this as a completely straight man, that's one of the prettiest boys...
Forum: Art Critique 06-19-2005, 09:02 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 2,475
Posted By Kern The Germ
I think the mountains in the background could...

I think the mountains in the background could stand a little smoothing, but that's a minor nitpick. It's fine on the cloud, but it doesn't look good on the mountains. Looks great with the color...
Forum: Art Critique 06-19-2005, 08:54 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,613
Posted By Kern The Germ
I think the outline around the focal character is...

I think the outline around the focal character is supposed to make her stand out more, and it does an admirable job of that. Without lines on them, the students in the background seem even more...
Forum: Art Critique 06-17-2005, 10:18 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,304
Posted By Kern The Germ
When my inks bleed or get jaggy, it's usually due...

When my inks bleed or get jaggy, it's usually due to one or two specific problems:

1. Unconfident inking. I've found that if I'm not exactly sure of what I'm inking and where, it tends to bleed up...
Forum: Sketchbooks 12-01-2004, 11:28 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 11,491
Posted By Kern The Germ
The heavy shading under the chin and on the eyes...

The heavy shading under the chin and on the eyes doesn't exactly mesh with the total lack of any greys on her cheeks. Was your light source really that X-Treem? Not knowing what you sister looks like...
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